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Topic: The Book
Turning the pages of the book I’ve been reading,
I feel like I’m gazing through,
The lines so carefully thought yet callously written,
It makes me look like a fool.
If I could do, half the things it said;
if I had bought some wine instead.
But now I’m Wise and I walk sober.
Halfway through the book, the pages weren't ready to move.
Its been three weeks and I’m stuck on that page,
anxious and a bit confused.
No I haven’t forgotten how to read and write,
No I haven’t lost the gift of sight.
It kept asking me,” Did you get what I sent?" "The Message",
the message I was to comprehend.
All over again, I would close my book,
and once again, I’d be off the hook.
The hook that fished me out of the dark,
which caused no pain and left no scar.
I'm a little nervous now;
it’s not just me who knows me now.
Anyone who would reach this page,
will have to sit and think again.
May 20, 2008
10:25 PM
Your poem seems to be saying much more than the words are conveying, much deeper than what appears on the surface...

Intriguing.
May 24, 2008
3:53 PM
When I read this it made me think look back on life. All your poems are so deep feeled with so much meaning.
May 24, 2008
6:59 PM
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